How Wrong!

by Kulbir Bhalla

She thinks I thrive
Because she can't see
That I'm only alive
When she looks at me.

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Comments on this Poem

An expressive verse further enhanced by an apt visual! Nice one, Kulbir!

Padmaja Iyengar
25-May-2015 08:39 AM

Welcome, Kulbir Ji
Wonderful Lines....

alwaysaparna
20-May-2015 11:17 AM

Aparnaji & Rupradhaji,

My gratitude for your apprecaition.

Aparnaji,

Thanks - again a very appropriate image to enhance the verse.

Kulbir
19-May-2015 07:47 AM

lovely!

Rupradha
18-May-2015 13:48 PM