Moon

by Dr. Kumarendra Mallick

tousled curls --
racing clouds veil
the moon

07-Apr-2016

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you, Amitabh to let go your imagination in appreciating the racing cloud, the touscled curls and all that is disorderly beauty.

kumarendramallick
08-Apr-2016 09:10 AM

Oh! what a great description of touscled curls that add extra beauty or, so to say, fill up the eye of the beholder! I salute your imaginations, Bijay babu. Thank you.

kumarendramallick
08-Apr-2016 09:08 AM

Beautiful poem

Amitabh Mitrea
07-Apr-2016 16:45 PM

Here the poet acts as a hairdresser, the hair stylist taking the scissors away from the conventional barber and taking the snaps, photographs too, the selfies of the models in his art studio. Tousled hair, where has he, at the airport perhaps on marking the beauties and blondes alighting from the airbuses. Maybe it some Julie or Bobby has taken his heart away! It is not about the Indian long hair and the tresses,. the hair braid and the red ribbon flowery over. .The word tousled casts the beauty of its own, untidy, messy, unkempt, disordered, disarranged, messed up, rumpled, dishevelled, bedraggled. It is a beauty to see the young girl in a dishevelled mass of hair. Tousled curls just like the racing clouds going to veil to veil the moon. But she is not a burquawalli here.

bijay kant dubey
07-Apr-2016 15:36 PM