Theme: Perception


Space, Air, Water, Fire, Earth
to be aware of
the dependence of all
on these elements
to acquire a form

Offer gratitude to all
known and unknown
past and present
as without being
dependent on them
one cannot get
essentials to live
and celebrate life

Surrender in all humility
to the Witness within
the only Sovereign
unperturbed and carefree
as the eternal concept
of independence


Read also: Panchatatva 


More By  :  Rajender Krishan

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Comments on this Poem

Comment An excellent poem!

16-Aug-2020 04:03 AM

Comment Enveloped in 'mithya ahamkar' we don't realise that not a single day be spent without being humble and grateful to Him.

Philosophical,deep and guiding us..

Neera Pradhan
25-Jul-2020 10:28 AM

Comment Integration, disintegration --- a cyclic programme. Like day and night.
Profound thought shared in a sublime manner.regards.

T.S.Chandra Mouli
23-Jul-2020 14:00 PM

Comment Poignantly presented the dependence and independence of the roles of the five major elements of life!

G Swaminathan
21-Jul-2020 23:31 PM

Comment You have explored the authentic and multifaceted meaning of Independence by providing us with a holistic perspective.

Attreyee Roy Chowdhury
21-Jul-2020 23:10 PM

Comment The poem give a philosophical view of Independence. It is subtle.

Prof. Shubha Tiwari
21-Jul-2020 20:03 PM

Comment The panchttatva, the five elements the body is composed of as for integration and disintegration and hence this call it dependence or independence.

bijay kant dubey
21-Jul-2020 14:02 PM

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