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Theme: Perception


An impulse
seeking manifestation
separates from
the whispering notes
that beguile the mind
In its own flow
the molten instinct,
shapes into a question
or an erudite statement,
and when mingled;
perhaps forms a riddle
Inducing the critic
to be the learner
and trace transient images
concealed within
the realms of
a blossoming poesy.


More By  :  Rajender Krishan

Views: 1433     Comments: 9

Comments on this Poem

Comment Very nice one , Sir.

04-Aug-2020 12:54 PM




p c katoch
03-Aug-2020 23:27 PM

Comment Expressed without pretence!
Just like water makes for its way, so do impulses by overpowering reflections. They are vivid and vague but with thoughtful meditation, find meaning and definite expression.
Super beginning, Awesome ending!

03-Aug-2020 10:11 AM

Comment Poesy is nicely expressed!

G Swaminathan
03-Aug-2020 08:34 AM

Comment Wow! Beautiful expression/description of poetic impulse!

Pavalamani Pragasam
03-Aug-2020 04:02 AM

Expression is an unfolding urge to manifest inner feelings in an endless variety. That is what I could understand. Nicely done.

Nalinaksha Mutsuddi
02-Aug-2020 21:46 PM

Comment What you say is happening when composing a poem and it is a matter of serendipity both for the poet and also the readers. It.s indeed a joyful experience in sharing new ideas in a novel manner through Poetry. That is the speciality og Poettry medium!

T A Ramesh
02-Aug-2020 13:41 PM

Comment Deep expressions! Lovely poetry!

02-Aug-2020 11:33 AM

Comment Yes, that's what poesy is.

T.S.Chandra Mouli
02-Aug-2020 04:08 AM

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