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Expressive and concise. Poetry is surely a reflection of what your soul
is saying quietly.
Very good embedded message
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Life is as one perceives it...our previous births have influence on our present one as we are caught in karmic chakra.
What comes to us may not be in our control.
But our reactions to it are.
That's how we create our fate.
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A beautiful poem with a fine message.
"Love or hate: Life has a universal trait."
Recently, you have shown an appreciable strain in your poems. Yes , it is your soulful delight in the FLOW!
REGARDS
R.K.Bhushan Sabharwal
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>Love or hate; Life has a universal trait
Each is the maker of one’s personal fate.<
Even as one has the illusion of being the 'maker of one's personal fate', one is not the maker of oneself, nor is one more evidently the maker of the world, whose events determine one into making decisions within its context. This applies to all of us who are providentially brought into existence to fulfil the world's fate in which all things play a role. Think of the many who have died or been killed by forces they have no control over. Indeed, every death is not planned as would be implied in being ‘the maker of one’s personal fate’ but an outcome in the greater scheme of fate over which only God has control.
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Beautiful poem indeed. Every line of this poem touches my heart. Thanks a lot.
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Last 2 lines really sum it up splendidly.
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Good verses but too entrenched in philosophy and imagination.
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Again an insightful peek...
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Poetry is really an an expression of one’s feelings with a concept at the time of expression which may be short termed or everlasting
Love or hate; Life has a universal trait
Each is the maker of one’s personal fate
The beautiful lines make a complete poem
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Love these lines...
"What perception ably does one hold?
Experience or the one that was told!"
Indrajit
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Faith leads to meditation which clarifies existence and makes life meaningful
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Reading the poem reaches out into the horizon of life.
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This is a masterpiece!
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Love or hate; Life has a universal trait
Each is the maker of one’s personal fate ...... beautifully summed up....
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A nicely composed poem to read about individuality and destiny along with one's desire in the world!
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It says it all.
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Yes. I agree with the metaphysical expression of this poem.
I am, indeed, bothered by the line: 'Love or hate; Life has a universal trait Each is the maker of one’s personal fate'.
Love and Hate, I feel,whether we like are not two sides of the coin. Is it possible for a mortal like us to eschew one and follow the other always?
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A NICE REFLECTIVE POEM ! - RAJ, NEW DELHI.
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